A few days ago I pitched the idea of Paramore's 'Last Hope' with my friend Helen.
Talking about it, it seemed we had a very clear idea on what we wanted.
We asked for feedback. We got positives and negatives. However I like negative comments, I see them as constructive criticism. Now that we know what may be difficult, we can work around it.
Here's the feedback:
-Strong structure and narrative
-It's relatable, what young people go through
-Cliché, but engages the audience
-We can fit in more at the beginning
-Organising will be key for making this as we need to get people together
I'm happy with the comments and criticism, because of this I know what to keep and what to improve. Helen and I will have to risk assess our plan before hand, regarding weather and fire hazards, and once we have done that, then let the filming begin!
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